Several lacks
The overall thing was ok, but there's a lot of things you'd need to improve. First, you got to make the pictures BIGGER. If you didn't already know, you can increase the size of your flash file by modificating the document (Ctrl+D). It obviously means the filesize will go up too, but you really need to do something about it 'cause it's a little too small right now. Also, except for the content itself, the graphics were awful. Come on, black text on a white screen? You've got to make something more original ... to put effort on your work. A good flash cannot be made in two or three hours, it takes much more ...
You've got work to do for the next one.