Well ...
I guess you won't be surprised to learn they don't like you ...
Anyway, the flash was horrible, way too short, not enough work behind the animating and no thought behind the flash itself. It means you pretty much have to improve everything, but most of all you have to get the will to make a good flash and put efforts behind.
Geez, I hate making that kind of review ...
I stoped reading after "Anyway,"
Boring, short, low quality
The flash was really bad. It was way too short and all there is was pretty lame too. The graphics were drawn with apparently no effort as the rest of the animation. I sadly can't express myself on the subject of the flash itself, but the technical part lacked lot of efforts. If you want to pass some message, either make it on the BBS or force yourself a little, at least for those like me who cares a little ...
if I made it on the BBS I'd be banned for it.
If I bothered to put effort into it it wouldnt make a difference.
And ... that's it ?
Ok, I'll try to find ideas for "constructive criticism", it's pretty hard but I guess you're used to it.
So eh ... I think you should start by lowering the filesize and a good way to do so would be to lower the quality of the music you use. You might also want to improve the graphics ... and may be actually put more than one frame in you movie, 'cause with just one frame we can hardly call it an animation. Another thing you could try to improve is the plot of your movie. You know, it was really interesting and it kept my breath away all the time, but I think you can do a little better though.
So, overall it was definitely bad bad bad, but you can get better ! All you need is to actually put a little, little effort in your work and you'll be able to do something thousand time better yaiy !
This review is extremely helpful, thank you! I will reduce the file size of the music by reducing the export quality from "imported mp3" quality to 16 kpbs, I will have multiple frames in the movie (probably more key frames than normal frames so I can do frame by frame animation as opposed to tweens), and I can make a riveting plot that Newgrounds viewers can appreciate, understand, and enjoy! Clearly I would not have thought of these ideas on my own so I hugely appreciate the time you took to review this film!
Haha that was great !
Graphics = 9 : very good. Clean, simple and sweet graphics, not exactly outstanding but almost worth a perfect mark.
Style = 10 : simply great ! If I could I'd give it a higher mark, it was really brilliant !
Sound = 5 : no headphone, couldn't hear anything ...
Violence = 2 : not exactly the point of the movie
Interactivity = 6 : near the higher mark I would give for a movie, interactivity belongs to games ... mostly
Humor = 8 : once again, it mainly resides in the style, but still, that was pretty amusing !
Overall = 9 : GREAT animation, I loved it a lot !
nice score breakdown! ur missing a lot without sound :D
Eh bien, un première année de TIM!
Salut mec, beau projet, tu as rajouté un scénario même. Tu t'es compliqué la vie et tu n'auras pas beaucoup de points pour, mais c'est pas mal!
- Alexandre Carle, 2e année TIM
Merci de ton encouragement, et effectivement, je me suis compliqué pas mal la vie... Mais bon quand on aime ça!
Original and entertaining
It's quite different than what we usually see around and it's well done too. It's a good combinaison usually ;)
whatch 10 000 frames ;) its better then this lol
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