Myst's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pootytang Adventures #026]

And ... that's it ?

Ok, I'll try to find ideas for "constructive criticism", it's pretty hard but I guess you're used to it.

So eh ... I think you should start by lowering the filesize and a good way to do so would be to lower the quality of the music you use. You might also want to improve the graphics ... and may be actually put more than one frame in you movie, 'cause with just one frame we can hardly call it an animation. Another thing you could try to improve is the plot of your movie. You know, it was really interesting and it kept my breath away all the time, but I think you can do a little better though.

So, overall it was definitely bad bad bad, but you can get better ! All you need is to actually put a little, little effort in your work and you'll be able to do something thousand time better yaiy !

JujubeLock responds:

This review is extremely helpful, thank you! I will reduce the file size of the music by reducing the export quality from "imported mp3" quality to 16 kpbs, I will have multiple frames in the movie (probably more key frames than normal frames so I can do frame by frame animation as opposed to tweens), and I can make a riveting plot that Newgrounds viewers can appreciate, understand, and enjoy! Clearly I would not have thought of these ideas on my own so I hugely appreciate the time you took to review this film!

[The IIDMDTT Part 01]

Haha that was great !

Graphics = 9 : very good. Clean, simple and sweet graphics, not exactly outstanding but almost worth a perfect mark.
Style = 10 : simply great ! If I could I'd give it a higher mark, it was really brilliant !
Sound = 5 : no headphone, couldn't hear anything ...
Violence = 2 : not exactly the point of the movie
Interactivity = 6 : near the higher mark I would give for a movie, interactivity belongs to games ... mostly
Humor = 8 : once again, it mainly resides in the style, but still, that was pretty amusing !
Overall = 9 : GREAT animation, I loved it a lot !

NightShadowTWO responds:

nice score breakdown! ur missing a lot without sound :D

[Say Something!]

Hehe I guess that's many people's opinion

It really is utterly annoying, but now I feel better :)

[About mass voting]

I don't think it proves anything ...

In fact, it's just a crappy movie that passes ... it doesn't prove anything, it could just mean the star syndicate mass voted it. I'm not telling you it's the actual case, I'm just saying it doesn't help you at all. Just another really bad movie for the star syndicate ...

[A bouncing ball]

Eh bien, un première année de TIM!

Salut mec, beau projet, tu as rajouté un scénario même. Tu t'es compliqué la vie et tu n'auras pas beaucoup de points pour, mais c'est pas mal!

- Alexandre Carle, 2e année TIM

polxonE responds:

Merci de ton encouragement, et effectivement, je me suis compliqué pas mal la vie... Mais bon quand on aime ça!

[Battalion 7 - Episode 3]

Not bad, keep on working

It's not bad at all, but there's room for improvement on evey point, just need a little more work.

By the way, congrats on getting the 1337iest filesize ;)

[OtherWorld]

Original and entertaining

It's quite different than what we usually see around and it's well done too. It's a good combinaison usually ;)

Ohls responds:

whatch 10 000 frames ;) its better then this lol